02-14-2011, 05:57 PM
The depressing thing is that this is often too true 
. Kudos to you for writing such a powerful work. The only thing I'd change is the "beyond the edge of consciousness" line (which might be a little cliche depending on your mileage), but heck, that's just nitpicking.
Thank you very, very much for sharing this. This is just wonderful.
. Kudos to you for writing such a powerful work. The only thing I'd change is the "beyond the edge of consciousness" line (which might be a little cliche depending on your mileage), but heck, that's just nitpicking.Thank you very, very much for sharing this. This is just wonderful.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?