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"Brain' foxtrot."
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02-14-2011, 05:48 PM
"sunset is a dying sunrise" is just perfect... I love how you turned the romantic image on it's head. I love how the very structure of the poem suggests dissolution. Thumbs up
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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"Brain' foxtrot." - by Ris Yerg - 02-11-2011, 05:16 PM
RE: "Brain' foxtrot." - by billy - 02-11-2011, 05:23 PM
RE: "Brain' foxtrot." - by addy - 02-14-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: "Brain' foxtrot." - by Ris Yerg - 02-14-2011, 06:01 PM
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