02-11-2011, 12:31 PM
First of all, I'm unnaturally fond of that title for some reason 
This has a great, great flow that's so easy, and I agree it's like a rap... for me the experience was like having my own thoughts fall like water from the poem's natural gravity, if that makes sense? As for the content, very raw and very clever. "Safe and sound I am bound to noun and adjective and consonant and vowel,"... what a quintissential line for a write. I'm jealous
This has a great, great flow that's so easy, and I agree it's like a rap... for me the experience was like having my own thoughts fall like water from the poem's natural gravity, if that makes sense? As for the content, very raw and very clever. "Safe and sound I am bound to noun and adjective and consonant and vowel,"... what a quintissential line for a write. I'm jealous
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?