Murky Purple
#7
I really adored the imagery in this one. Probably wouldn't have chosen that last line, but that's a very minor nitpick (I probably just didn't get the deeper theme here Tongue). Vivid, almost syrupy words. Nicely done
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Murky Purple - by madA - 02-07-2011, 04:55 AM
RE: Murky Purple - by billy - 02-07-2011, 05:58 AM
RE: Murky Purple - by Ris Yerg - 02-07-2011, 03:29 PM
RE: Murky Purple - by billy - 02-07-2011, 03:36 PM
RE: Murky Purple - by Ris Yerg - 02-07-2011, 03:41 PM
RE: Murky Purple - by heslopian - 02-11-2011, 06:09 AM
RE: Murky Purple - by addy - 02-11-2011, 12:03 PM
RE: Murky Purple - by madA - 02-17-2011, 04:45 AM



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