Murky Purple

[billy]

Magenta sighs
Ooze from hazy eyes
As orphan lilac songs echo
Inside crimson hearts
Bodies wade through violet smog
Miming amidst the mist
Wind whistles past restless trees
Shadows tickle lampposts’ toes
Nervous laughter muffles
Like the blurry moon
Turgid souls swamp
The turbid side of life

high madA and thanks for the poem.

Shadows tickle lampposts’ toes
is a great line. some good imagery, i like the imagery.
for me it could be a litte less tell and a little more show
i really enjoyed though got some decent internal rhythm going on
thanks for your 1st poem, hope to see more.