02-06-2011, 10:17 PM
(02-02-2011, 07:41 PM)waitingforgodet Wrote: thanks addy, yes, if cheating can be called sinister, then it is a sinister poem--the last line, of course, indicates that. But tell me how you knew from the first lines, please--jimThere was nothing that inherently gave it away, really... like I said, I've probably read too much cynical stuff where if the story starts out too sweet and pleasant, it's a sign that things are bound not to go well LOL
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
