Jenny Dear
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(02-02-2011, 07:41 PM)waitingforgodet Wrote:  thanks addy, yes, if cheating can be called sinister, then it is a sinister poem--the last line, of course, indicates that. But tell me how you knew from the first lines, please--jim
There was nothing that inherently gave it away, really... like I said, I've probably read too much cynical stuff where if the story starts out too sweet and pleasant, it's a sign that things are bound not to go well LOL Big Grin
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Jenny Dear - by waitingforgodet - 02-02-2011, 02:07 AM
RE: Jenny Dear - by billy - 02-02-2011, 11:23 AM
RE: Jenny Dear - by waitingforgodet - 02-02-2011, 07:29 PM
RE: Jenny Dear - by addy - 02-02-2011, 11:37 AM
RE: Jenny Dear - by waitingforgodet - 02-02-2011, 07:41 PM
RE: Jenny Dear - by addy - 02-06-2011, 10:17 PM
RE: Jenny Dear - by billy - 02-02-2011, 07:38 PM



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