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Like The Surgeon's Knife
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02-06-2011, 10:45 AM
Thank you, Jack. I'm not completely satisfied with it yet--are we ever, though?--proper form, I think, is tough, but when we come close to it or at least think we're on the right track, I feel that it reads easiest. I got the idea for it while recuperating after surgery and reading poetry and books in bed; a Dylan Thomas poem about why he writes gave me the idea for counting syllables--thanks--jim
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Like The Surgeon's Knife - by waitingforgodet - 02-03-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: Like The Surgeon's Knife - by billy - 02-05-2011, 09:35 AM
RE: Like The Surgeon's Knife - by waitingforgodet - 02-05-2011, 10:41 AM
RE: Like The Surgeon's Knife - by heslopian - 02-06-2011, 09:15 AM
RE: Like The Surgeon's Knife - by waitingforgodet - 02-06-2011, 10:45 AM
RE: Like The Surgeon's Knife - by addy - 02-06-2011, 10:22 PM
RE: Like The Surgeon's Knife - by waitingforgodet - 02-06-2011, 11:21 PM
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