"Arrival."

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"Arrival."

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The Dog's Bollocks.

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02-02-2011, 11:22 AM

Oh, I love this one. There's something unconsciously melodic about it. Very nice.

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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"Arrival." - by Ris Yerg - 01-31-2011, 08:04 PM

RE: "Arrival." - by billy - 01-31-2011, 08:17 PM

RE: "Arrival." - by Ris Yerg - 01-31-2011, 08:24 PM

RE: "Arrival." - by addy - 02-02-2011, 11:22 AM

RE: "Arrival." - by Ris Yerg - 02-02-2011, 03:41 PM

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