"Inhabited island."

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"Inhabited island."

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02-02-2011, 10:38 AM

very sparse

at 1st i thought the last 3 lines unnecessary but after a
few reads they begin to work really well and tie in with the 1st verse.
thanks for the read as always ris

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"Inhabited island." - by Ris Yerg - 02-01-2011, 04:23 PM

RE: "Inhabited island." - by billy - 02-02-2011, 10:38 AM

RE: "Inhabited island." - by Ris Yerg - 02-02-2011, 03:46 PM

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