01-15-2011, 03:05 AM
who moulded the earth and the sky.
and The Knowledge escaped me.
Seemed a tad clumsy.
Other than that, for me the poem is perfect. The second verse is my favorite, too!
*Clumsy in that the rhythm is a bit off.
and The Knowledge escaped me.
Seemed a tad clumsy.
Other than that, for me the poem is perfect. The second verse is my favorite, too!
*Clumsy in that the rhythm is a bit off.