Nihilism

[billy]

the world is a spherical rock
hurtling across black canvas.

the stars are holes into another, line break works here
less painful existence.

we will never be small enough
to squeeze through them and live works here

again. no matter what you doesn't work here
do, life will break doesn't work here

your heart and re-assemble it, with all the skill
of a crippled mechanic. love is a frog’s heart this this line is my fave

doodled on napkins by children.
and that is all that is all that is all. i love this ending

in some places the line breaks work and in others they don't. (for me)
the poem as a whole is really good. i like the imagery i like the format.
sorry for not replying sooner