Whiskey, Romance and Poetry

[addy]

Needs to be touched up for a few spelling errors ("you" instead of "your" in some of the lines... replace "resonates" with "resonate", etc), but overall an interesting piece. I liked how you used the image of whiskey, tangentially comparing it to love poetry... an addiction to intoxication, illusion, co-dependence, even a touch deceit perhaps? If I had to pick a point to revise, "coz I'm tired of being the only one that's hurt" for me probably doesn't fit in as well as the others, because I didn't see an indication that the narrator was trying to actively hurt back the object of his/her affection (unless he/she meant to wreak emotional hurt via passive-aggressiveness, which I can accept makes sense). There's really some good stuff here worth polishing. Thanks for the read