single lamp shining;
for me it feels too stark a line syntax wise. compared to the rest of the piece and could do with an 'with a' in front of it.
There's no baby Jesus
below that lamp light,
merely a bedside table,
mouldy envelopes
and dusty novels.
I trudge towards it,
then put my key in the door.
i thought were really good lines. for some reason, dusty novels holds the key to the whole poem for me.
thanks as always for the read
