12-17-2010, 11:58 AM
This is a really great piece. Around the middle part I found it pleasant enough, like a nice train of thought poem that smoothly glides through the pleasant visuals. But the image of the O-formation was so striking, so profound and magical, the perfect heart to this poem. Nicely done 
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?