Well, I don't know Billy I'm sure it took 30 minutes to write (so it has to be good right). Some things have an unintentional humor to them. 
It has become shorthand for some of my writer friends we'll read one of each others poems and then say:
something
something
some
a man
a nearby dog
Someone
Then laugh.
Did you hear Maya Angelou is going to be the next Poet Laurette
(just messing with you)

It has become shorthand for some of my writer friends we'll read one of each others poems and then say:
something
something
some
a man
a nearby dog
Someone
Then laugh.
(12-17-2010, 08:18 AM)billy Wrote: hehe sometimes i think some like to hear the sound of their own text![]()
i thought that crit pretty bad. i think many who write crits think poetry isn't allowed to be telly. for me some poems are best that way and some aren't
and when is larry going to get some of his mates from there posing here ?
oh larrrrryeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
(12-17-2010, 08:23 AM)Lawrence Wrote: Mates? I just told you I was fucking banned! XDBy them? Who haven't they banned?
Did you hear Maya Angelou is going to be the next Poet Laurette
(just messing with you)
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

