Migration

[billy]

i don't think i want to change any of it, or comment that something needs changing.
for me it works as is. i don't think it profound or fantastic but i do feel it's a well rounded piece of poetry that.s easy to the eye and ear. i like the sentiment of it and some of the imagery.
my little nit would be a cap on each line, even if it isn't the beginning of a new sentence but as usual thats jmo

thanks for posting what for me was a good write.