Ornaments

[heslopian]

Yes, there should be a comma after God. I can't think why I never noticed that (this poem is a few months old). You say you're no good at grammar, but methinks you're quite the dark horse, Billy
Thanks for the kindly feedback

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Thanks for noticing the tragic element, Addy My mother really has those horrid ornaments, and if you saw them the tragedy would tear out your heart And seriously, china clowns are just wrong... I swear they're alive, and molest me in my sleep...