11-24-2010, 04:30 PM
the best line for me is 'well shit'
the rest of the poem is great but i love the resignation that line gives that one is totally fucked (excuse the expletive)
while it reads like an out and out crash i take it to be a metaphoric collision.
the last main stanza id for me extremely good.
thanks for the read, call by more often
the rest of the poem is great but i love the resignation that line gives that one is totally fucked (excuse the expletive)
while it reads like an out and out crash i take it to be a metaphoric collision.
the last main stanza id for me extremely good.
thanks for the read, call by more often