The Evil Within You I Adore.

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I agree, you did a good job with the edit ... you weren't shy to whip it into shape and trim where it needed. I like the results. I even like the new way you ended it... it's not a surrender, exactly, but you leave the reader with the idea that the pain that went with the love has brought you to a new place, a new kind of self-awareness. Good job with this

Thank you very much Addy and to Billy, without your help I couldn't have got anyway so yeah, Kudos for that guys. I'm glad you like the reedit and I hope you like more future work