Duracell Doesn't Cut It. (content)

[LiteraryAntiquity]

Brilliantly witty and totally a sense of humour I can get on board with. I'd only change the piece as follows: 'why can’t some clever Trevor make the battery have more power' The only reason I say this is because your intention is for 'Trevor' to rhyme with 'Ever', if I am correct, but due to the fact we read 'Power' first it looks like a very forced rhyme right before the end. After an epic comedy poem I think you should choose a word further from the rhyming pattern to go 'tween. I think that's about it on a critical front. I really liked it Billy.