11-18-2010, 08:50 PM
This is stunning, I loved it. I've never been one for the ins and outs of a poem. I get far more joy from the emotions that are embedded behind it and this is one for a record on that front. I really enjoyed it and it's written in a way that requires no pacing, you don't need even a title for the poem to have an effect. It's a great, not so great, topic and that's why it hits hard. Well done.