The Evil Within You I Adore.

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Interesting piece A small edit would do wonders for it.

My only suggestion would be that, given the title, aside from your desperate/hateful reactions to being in love with that person you can also devote more lines to giving the reader an idea what makes you think this person is so evil (what does this person say/do?). You don't need to flesh it out literally, just something that will give us enough of an impression.

Thanks for the read!