11-11-2010, 05:30 AM
Hi Jack,
Thank you for your deep read. I'll consider many of the options you gave me (very much appreciated). Oh, and yes those lines near the end are a reference to Daddy by Plath.
Very Helpful, thank you again.
Todd
Thank you for your deep read. I'll consider many of the options you gave me (very much appreciated). Oh, and yes those lines near the end are a reference to Daddy by Plath.
Very Helpful, thank you again.
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
