The Dance (content warning)
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for me the the meester language should have been more prominent.
throughout the poem.

as the merry coon’s shoes make splinters in the stand. was for me one of the best lines i've ever read. it lests us know that while there's some degrading of knee graz it's only a show. the dancer is obviously a talented tap dancer. and not at all black.

apart from my nit above. i enjoy the entertainment within the piece.
i can't watch the vid or my pc will blow out Sad
i get the feel of the black and white minstrels or something akin to them.
theres a racial tension but i think it's inverse.

anyway, after not saying a lot, i can say i enjoyed reading what was for me a good poem.
thanks jack.
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The Dance (content warning) - by heslopian - 11-06-2010, 02:42 AM
RE: The Dance (content warning) - by billy - 11-06-2010, 08:11 AM
RE: The Dance (content warning) - by heslopian - 11-06-2010, 10:25 AM
RE: The Dance (content warning) - by addy - 11-06-2010, 09:22 AM
RE: The Dance (content warning) - by billy - 11-06-2010, 05:34 PM



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