~That Last Kiss~

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~That Last Kiss~

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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10-29-2010, 06:26 PM

it feels better fd.
it flows well though the end of;
too high right now, I simply can't focus and always for more I will yearn.
feels forced.

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~That Last Kiss~ - by ficosdarkness - 10-29-2010, 07:20 AM

RE: ~That Last Kiss~ - by billy - 10-29-2010, 08:31 AM

RE: ~That Last Kiss~ - by billy - 10-29-2010, 06:26 PM

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