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Senryu of my passion; boxing
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10-27-2010, 09:38 PM
Apart from the grammatical mistake which Billy pointed out, this is a lovely Senryu, which perfectly encapsulates how you feel about the sport. "The cool embrace of sweat" is an excellent phrase.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Senryu of my passion; boxing - by meanbubbles - 10-27-2010, 05:06 PM
RE: Senryu of my passion; boxing - by billy - 10-27-2010, 05:49 PM
RE: Senryu of my passion; boxing - by heslopian - 10-27-2010, 09:38 PM
RE: Senryu of my passion; boxing - by meanbubbles - 10-28-2010, 04:31 PM
RE: Senryu of my passion; boxing - by billy - 10-28-2010, 04:48 PM
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