10-27-2010, 05:49 PM
should it read as;
I square my gloves,
Feel the cool embrace of sweat,
and carry on tall.
i like the feel of it. it works well for me.
senryu and haiku don't really need a title. the poem is supposed to contain all we need to understand the poem.
senryu or haiku is often all that's needed.
I square my gloves,
Feel the cool embrace of sweat,
and carry on tall.
i like the feel of it. it works well for me.
senryu and haiku don't really need a title. the poem is supposed to contain all we need to understand the poem.
senryu or haiku is often all that's needed.