Silent Critics

Silent Critics

kath3

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10-20-2010, 01:24 AM

I loved it ... it was perfect right down to the period.
Now, I may very well have read wrongly into it but this is what I felt ...

I am a boiled beet (hurt and beat down)
flayed open in (left abandon)
the snowy field (snowy white, purity, innocence)

Great rant indeed.

You give to the world when you're giving your best to somebody else.

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Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-06-2010, 10:09 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by addy - 09-06-2010, 10:47 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by billy - 10-12-2010, 09:41 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-13-2010, 11:44 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by billy - 10-13-2010, 11:56 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 07:35 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-18-2010, 08:23 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by kath3 - 10-20-2010, 01:24 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-21-2010, 12:46 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by kath3 - 10-21-2010, 01:16 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-21-2010, 10:40 AM

RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-29-2010, 11:50 AM

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