Silent Critics
#6
I know this post is a little old but I am new here so...

I had to tell you I absolutely loved your ending:

I am a boiled beet
flayed open in
the snowy field

Best,

Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-06-2010, 10:09 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by addy - 09-06-2010, 10:47 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by billy - 10-12-2010, 09:41 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-13-2010, 11:44 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by billy - 10-13-2010, 11:56 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 07:35 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-18-2010, 08:23 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by kath3 - 10-20-2010, 01:24 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-21-2010, 12:46 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by kath3 - 10-21-2010, 01:16 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-21-2010, 10:40 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-29-2010, 11:50 AM



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