10-18-2010, 07:35 AM
I know this post is a little old but I am new here so...
I had to tell you I absolutely loved your ending:
I am a boiled beet
flayed open in
the snowy field
Best,
Todd
I had to tell you I absolutely loved your ending:
I am a boiled beet
flayed open in
the snowy field
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

