First Seminar (content warning)
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(10-15-2010, 07:32 AM)billy Wrote:  yeah, you could but in such a short piece vera drake gives something to the couplet.

i only asked because i was rushed Sad, normally i do a check of names if i don't know.
personally, i'd leave it jack.

if you want to enlighten people why not say;
vera drake the abortionist.
Ah okay I'll leave it then. I reckon "Vera Drake the abortionist" would make the sentence too long, and as she isn't real, people might think it misleading. No need for the sad face, Billy!Smile I only ask because I want to improve, and you're an objective critic (which is rare).
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First Seminar (content warning) - by heslopian - 10-13-2010, 11:33 PM
RE: First Seminar (content warning) - by billy - 10-14-2010, 05:49 AM
RE: First Seminar (content warning) - by billy - 10-14-2010, 06:18 PM
RE: First Seminar (content warning) - by billy - 10-15-2010, 07:32 AM
RE: First Seminar (content warning) - by heslopian - 10-15-2010, 07:40 AM
RE: First Seminar (content warning) - by billy - 10-15-2010, 03:25 PM
RE: First Seminar (content warning) - by addy - 10-22-2010, 10:40 AM



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