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Won't Go On Pretending

Won't Go On Pretending
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10-14-2010, 12:38 PM
Okay, I'll admit that the suicide thing put me off a bit at the beggining (Cliche) I thought you were another 'emo' kid writing about being depressed. Then I read the whole poem and was very moved by it! It was beautiful to say the least. Bravo on your good work!
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Won't Go On Pretending - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-13-2010, 11:55 AM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by billy - 10-13-2010, 12:18 PM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by addy - 10-13-2010, 03:21 PM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by heslopian - 10-13-2010, 03:49 PM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-14-2010, 09:19 AM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by lizzyrose12 - 10-14-2010, 12:38 PM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-15-2010, 03:00 AM



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