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Won't Go On Pretending

Won't Go On Pretending
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#3
10-13-2010, 03:21 PM
Some inspired lines in this one. This read a lot like a song to me.

An rare dark piece from you, bianca. Thanks for sharing this
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Messages In This Thread
Won't Go On Pretending - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-13-2010, 11:55 AM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by billy - 10-13-2010, 12:18 PM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by addy - 10-13-2010, 03:21 PM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by heslopian - 10-13-2010, 03:49 PM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-14-2010, 09:19 AM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by lizzyrose12 - 10-14-2010, 12:38 PM
RE: Won't Go On Pretending - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-15-2010, 03:00 AM



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