10-08-2010, 11:06 AM
I'm not sure I get the title, but perhaps I'm just slow LOL 
I think some of the storytelling in this can be shortened, made more concise. This has the added benefit of making your images tighter. Still, I very much like the heartfelt theme. It's similar to one of your older dandelion poems, but I'm happy that this one conveys a greater sense of self-love (obviously not in a bad way but in a liberating way)
I think some of the storytelling in this can be shortened, made more concise. This has the added benefit of making your images tighter. Still, I very much like the heartfelt theme. It's similar to one of your older dandelion poems, but I'm happy that this one conveys a greater sense of self-love (obviously not in a bad way but in a liberating way)
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?