Urbanised by William Marsland.

Urbanised by William Marsland.

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10-04-2010, 05:49 AM

thanks Bianca, i changed light to glory Wink

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thanks for the feed back jack
the colon would work. i prefer to let the white space be a comma
because my grammar sucks big time. glad you enjoyed it.

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Urbanised by William Marsland. - by billy - 09-14-2010, 03:00 PM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by Touchstone - 09-14-2010, 06:00 PM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by billy - 09-14-2010, 06:23 PM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by billy - 09-15-2010, 05:53 AM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by addy - 09-15-2010, 02:15 PM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by billy - 09-15-2010, 08:14 PM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-26-2010, 11:04 AM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by Touchstone - 09-26-2010, 12:03 PM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by heslopian - 10-04-2010, 02:16 AM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by billy - 10-04-2010, 05:49 AM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by heslopian - 10-04-2010, 07:43 AM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by billy - 10-04-2010, 09:17 AM

RE: Urbanised by William Marsland. - by heslopian - 10-04-2010, 11:40 AM

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