10-03-2010, 06:25 AM
good strong poem (is it okay to call ya jack) heslopian.
some really good lines and imagery; way too many to mention.
L2 tall and narrow like models, expose ;
what a fantastic simile for a window.
there's many more in the poem but i wish i'd wrote this one.
this poem would be out of place on the printed page. extremely well done
thanks for the read.
some really good lines and imagery; way too many to mention.
L2 tall and narrow like models, expose ;
what a fantastic simile for a window.
there's many more in the poem but i wish i'd wrote this one.
this poem would be out of place on the printed page. extremely well done
thanks for the read.