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The Sweet Eater

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The Dog's Bollocks.

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01-25-2010, 03:51 PM

Hm, again the punctuations prove to be my downfall Smile

Thanks again for the excellent critique. It's really helping me firm up my writing.

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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The Sweet Eater - by addy - 12-21-2009, 03:14 PM

RE: The Sweet Eater - by billy - 12-21-2009, 05:33 PM

RE: The Sweet Eater - by addy - 12-22-2009, 10:18 PM

RE: The Sweet Eater - by addy - 01-25-2010, 03:21 PM

RE: The Sweet Eater - by billy - 01-25-2010, 03:32 PM

RE: The Sweet Eater - by addy - 01-25-2010, 03:51 PM

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