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billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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09-06-2010, 10:20 AM

the first verse feels kinda
luxurious and decadent to me for some reason.
and the last was like an opposite.

thanks for a warm poem Bianca. Wink

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The Sun - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-06-2010, 10:10 AM

RE: The Sun - by billy - 09-06-2010, 10:20 AM

RE: The Sun - by addy - 09-06-2010, 10:50 AM

RE: The Sun - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-06-2010, 12:16 PM

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