Silent Critics
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feelings fly from me
like static electricity
flowing through the room
bouncing off the glass
and rock wall

rejection
anger
frustration
hurt

are postings horse droppings
manure
poetry and story
cow dung
now frozen in the snow
that doesn't stinketh
anymore?


poems and stories
are personal
I am a boiled beet
flayed open in
the snowy field

©12/14/09
Bianca Blush
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Messages In This Thread
Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-06-2010, 10:09 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by addy - 09-06-2010, 10:47 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by billy - 10-12-2010, 09:41 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-13-2010, 11:44 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by billy - 10-13-2010, 11:56 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 07:35 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-18-2010, 08:23 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by kath3 - 10-20-2010, 01:24 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-21-2010, 12:46 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by kath3 - 10-21-2010, 01:16 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-21-2010, 10:40 AM
RE: Silent Critics - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-29-2010, 11:50 AM



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