Better Than Beans On Toast.
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Better Than Beans On Toast.
Better Than Beans On Toast.


    Lewd, screwed and imbued.
    Filled with what the fuck was that;
    drugs, and snake-charmers hugs in spoiled foil
    fucks them over, hypnotize the despise
    into lies, beyond mascara laden cries.
    Sucking, fucking. Who the fuck’s looking
    at pustules pissing puss and blood?
    Track-marks float, skin-septic spokes,
    choked veins strained and screaming,
    tortured, steaming, fucked yet gleaming eyed.
    The needle piercing, not into an optic nerve just yet;
    instead the flaccid penis feels the silver stainless steel
    penetrate and flood the blood, unforgiving                          


by W. Marsland.



full critique welcome Wink

edited: changed basks to bask after feedback from addy Smile
replaced [adult content] with [Better Than Beans On Toast.] on reflection it's a pretty tame poem really [thanks to leanne]
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Better Than Beans On Toast. - by billy - 08-17-2010, 07:19 PM
RE: (adult content)!!! - by addy - 08-18-2010, 08:31 AM
RE: (adult content)!!! - by billy - 10-12-2010, 09:44 AM
RE: (adult content)!!! - by lizzyrose12 - 10-12-2010, 11:10 AM
RE: (adult content)!!! - by billy - 10-12-2010, 11:43 AM
RE: (adult content)!!! - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-13-2010, 12:11 PM
RE: (adult content)!!! - by billy - 10-13-2010, 05:06 PM
RE: (adult content)!!! - by Cousin Kil - 08-07-2015, 04:29 PM
RE: (adult content)!!! - by Leanne - 08-08-2015, 05:23 AM
RE: (adult content)!!! - by Mark A Becker - 08-08-2015, 07:24 AM
RE: Better Than Beans On Toast. - by billy - 08-08-2015, 08:16 AM



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