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The Dog's Bollocks.

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01-22-2010, 08:43 AM

That last line made me laugh out loud.

Pitch-perfect ending Big Grin

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Knocked Out. - by mrmod - 01-22-2010, 08:16 AM

RE: Knocked Out. - by addy - 01-22-2010, 08:43 AM

RE: Knocked Out. - by billy - 01-22-2010, 08:48 AM

RE: Knocked Out. - by . . . . - 01-30-2010, 08:13 AM

RE: Knocked Out. - by billy - 01-31-2010, 05:07 PM

RE: Knocked Out. - by srijantje - 01-31-2010, 05:31 PM

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