Freedom's Just Out My Window
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I'm not up for much critiquing but this caught my eye:

(08-11-2010, 11:00 AM)Bianca Alabaster Wrote:  ...they don't age inside, they are forever trapped in that 'year of their crime'...
I think there's a poem in that (for you to write, not me Wink )
"The fool doth think he is wise, but the wise man knows himself to be a fool."
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RE: Freedom's Just Out My Window - by billy - 07-15-2010, 04:28 PM
RE: Freedom's Just Out My Window - by addy - 07-16-2010, 02:01 PM
RE: Freedom's Just Out My Window - by Touchstone - 08-11-2010, 11:19 AM
RE: Freedom's Just Out My Window - by addy - 08-11-2010, 02:03 PM
RE: Freedom's Just Out My Window - by addy - 08-18-2010, 08:26 AM



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