08-11-2010, 11:19 AM
I'm not up for much critiquing but this caught my eye:
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(08-11-2010, 11:00 AM)Bianca Alabaster Wrote: ...they don't age inside, they are forever trapped in that 'year of their crime'...I think there's a poem in that (for you to write, not me
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"The fool doth think he is wise, but the wise man knows himself to be a fool."

