01-21-2010, 01:47 PM
A lot of people believe that poetry is form. When they get that idea stuck in their heads, their poetry becomes stiff; words atrophied in their own definitions. I think you need to let this poem breathe a little bit. Let the words out of their box so they can sing. There is definately a poem in there.
"As the spirit wanes, the form appears," Charles Bukowski.
"As the spirit wanes, the form appears," Charles Bukowski.