Woven Water by William Marsland.
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(01-21-2010, 09:03 AM)addy Wrote:  Beautiful as always Smile

The one eensy detail I would change is the word "prancing", but don't even worry about it. I think its already nice as is.
thanks addy. for reading and commenting.

i'll give some background to the poem at a later date Smile
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Woven Water by William Marsland. - by billy - 01-20-2010, 04:18 PM
RE: Woven Water by William Marsland. - by Benny2guns - 01-20-2010, 06:25 PM
RE: Woven Water by William Marsland. - by billy - 01-21-2010, 09:03 AM
RE: Woven Water by William Marsland. - by addy - 01-21-2010, 09:03 AM
RE: Woven Water by William Marsland. - by billy - 01-21-2010, 09:16 AM
RE: Woven Water by William Marsland. - by NadCloutier - 01-21-2010, 12:03 PM
RE: Woven Water by William Marsland. - by billy - 01-21-2010, 12:18 PM



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