07-16-2010, 01:56 PM
The images you used are really delightful. No wonder you love this one so much.
My only comment would be that for me, the intro's theme (about the definition of coveting) seemed removed from the sense I got from the body of the poem... basically they seemed like they could be two different pieces for me. Both wonderful, but just different. Just IMO.
Thanks for posting this
My only comment would be that for me, the intro's theme (about the definition of coveting) seemed removed from the sense I got from the body of the poem... basically they seemed like they could be two different pieces for me. Both wonderful, but just different. Just IMO.
Thanks for posting this
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?