All About you

[Therrin]

Guys thanks so much for the feed back and all the critique...
I dont think the enjambment is right or maybe it is? well
so here is my 3rd draft.... watchu think?
oh and the end where it says im cool yeah its cliche but i found it amusing lol wow... anyway


You swept on like the wind
and left me in it's wake.
With our scrap book on my lap
you left me in blank.
I was a book
whose story became cliché,
a song without a chorus
played on replay

I once played melody
now I just strum melancholy.
I would've said sorry but blue can't turn green
I danced, tried to catch you butterfly
So sophisticated
you knew my next move.

I ate your words every day to survive.
Believed you,
then stabbed me like a knife.
You swept on like the wind
and left me in it's wake
With our scrap book on my lap,
you left me in blank.

Summer fades
Clouds darken the sky.
It rains out side
When will the sun shine?
Oh misery, she sent you!

Flowers will bloom
kids will play by the pool.
Birds will flock North
I'll still be cool

You are a lost artifact
I am ill...