06-23-2010, 05:57 PM
I always liked the simplicity of your language and your ideas, sis. 
And I almost cried over how sweet and funny and quirky this poem is, while at the same time having a profound depth.
It made me think that the form didn't matter all that much, actually. And if a poem makes me not care about form, then it's a VERY good poem.
And I almost cried over how sweet and funny and quirky this poem is, while at the same time having a profound depth.It made me think that the form didn't matter all that much, actually. And if a poem makes me not care about form, then it's a VERY good poem.