(06-20-2010, 12:01 PM)Bianca Alabaster Wrote: Unwelcome Villaini read it before but never got chance to reply Bianca
your evil energy will
seep into the light
first at the edges
like a slow creep
of mold growth
then, evil Villain
at the edges –
you will be [you'll be]
that flame burning
a piece of parchment
The light ochre-yellow
parchment holding
beautiful prose,
poetry and musings
will burn up like
a moth in a lantern
after you stained [stain]?
every word and
every writer
once again
Unwelcome Villain
better is the woman
who has never lived
than she to live and see [feels a little awkward B] how about;
the evil that is done [than lived to see]
under the sun.
© 6/16/2010
[poem about a yahoo poetry group where I left and then found a different site to post and then the owner of that "nasty" group recently joined the other site and I am frustrated - seems I can't escape the person.]

yes you can

a good rant poem that says what you mean to say
i really like the first 4 lines of the 2nd stanza

thanks for posting it. what does he do that makes him so bad?
