Senti-Mentalism
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i know i'm way off base but it
reads to me like its about a spermBlush

i like the way it flows.
the last three couplets
work well.

i get a feeling of
not wanting to dwell on now
(the now not being too nice a place)

the last couplet saying; go with the flow.

thanks for the read digna Smile
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Senti-Mentalism - by digna_sofia - 06-15-2010, 04:53 PM
RE: Senti-Mentalism - by billy - 06-15-2010, 05:14 PM
RE: Senti-Mentalism - by addy - 06-19-2010, 08:51 PM
RE: Senti-Mentalism - by digna_sofia - 06-23-2010, 05:37 PM



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