06-15-2010, 05:14 PM
i know i'm way off base but it
reads to me like its about a sperm
i like the way it flows.
the last three couplets
work well.
i get a feeling of
not wanting to dwell on now
(the now not being too nice a place)
the last couplet saying; go with the flow.
thanks for the read digna
reads to me like its about a sperm

i like the way it flows.
the last three couplets
work well.
i get a feeling of
not wanting to dwell on now
(the now not being too nice a place)
the last couplet saying; go with the flow.
thanks for the read digna
