Mountain's Mist

[billy]

from what was said in the poem i think

"Man is the bringer of calamity
or the maker of peace"

is a bit redundant even if it is your insight Bianca,
some nice images with the fog.


this was my fave part.


Fog that covers
the flaws of man
eases down
from the mountain
- beloved
moist on my lips
and eyelashes
cool in my lungs
ah, Dragonsbreath maybe!

thanks for the poem Bianca