06-09-2010, 03:08 PM
This poem clinches it. I LIKE you, Loveblind. You've just created a kind of mantra in your chorus right there. And it's a VERY good refrain, given the rest of the poem.
My comments for improvement were basically covered by Addy, and given that they weren't big improvements, I think you're doing very well.
My comments for improvement were basically covered by Addy, and given that they weren't big improvements, I think you're doing very well.